James is a guy who is totally sweet, and has been my friend for years. He is also rather talented in school (seriously, he's a genius), and this is a SONNET he wrote. It's amazing so I have asked if I can share it on here...
In my mind these thought keep me up all night.
With my heart pounding, as if its ran a mile,
Beating my ribcage with all of its might.
All for you; for your laugh and great big smile.
Beauty is not just on your surface skin,
But complete: hand to hand, from face to floor.
I just can't hide what I hold inside;
These feelings... Are impossible to ignore.
I don't know how to put these all across,
Does my sonnet work well at all? Are you happy? Cross?
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